Kia ora! I am a year 7 student in room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Hi Rollin,I'm Emma from paroa school. I like how you put a picture of what you are doing. But I found it a bit hard to read the writing in your book, so maybe next time you could make the writing more darker and clear but other than that it was really cool bye.
Hey Rollin Im Bella from Paroa School, I really liked your writing and how you explain everything. Petedelete sounds pretty cool!! Maybe next time to be BTB (Better Than Before) you could make the writing a bit easier to see but otherwise its pretty good. Byyyeeeeeee
Hi Rollin,I'm Emma from paroa school.
ReplyDeleteI like how you put a picture of what you are doing.
But I found it a bit hard to read the writing in your book,
so maybe next time you could make the writing more darker and clear but other than that it was really cool bye.
I can see you have organised your ideas into paragraphs Rollin, ka pai to mahi!
ReplyDeleteHey Rollin Im Bella from Paroa School, I really liked your writing and how you explain everything. Petedelete sounds pretty cool!! Maybe next time to be BTB (Better Than Before) you could make the writing a bit easier to see but otherwise its pretty good.
ReplyDeleteByyyeeeeeee