Kia ora! I am a year 7 student in room 5 at Ahipara School, in the Far North of New Zealand. My teacher is Ms Peters. This is where I share my learning. Please leave a positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
hi I am Aaron from Paroa school, I am eleven years old and I like to read lots. I like the way you put the picters in but I would like youer writing thats red to be in a coler like black or yellow
Hi I'm Curtis and I go to paroa school. I like how you added soccer into it because i like soccer as well and I want to get better. next time try to add something that you know or you can do with a soccer ball.
This is really awesome. Maybe next time you could have the writing a different color so it easy to read. I would like to go to canada too! My favourite place in canada is labrador.
hi I am Aaron from Paroa school, I am eleven years old and I like to read lots. I like the way you put the picters in but I would like youer writing thats red to be in a coler like black or yellow
ReplyDeletethat is rely good but next time explan more but ather then that it was good
ReplyDeleteHi I'm Curtis and I go to paroa school.
ReplyDeleteI like how you added soccer into it because i like soccer as well and I want to get better. next time try to add something that you know or you can do with a soccer ball.
Hi i'm Harry from paroa school
ReplyDeleteThis is really awesome. Maybe next time you could have the writing a different color so it easy to read. I would like to go to canada too! My favourite place in canada is labrador.
Hi its liam from paroa school i am your buddy.good job rip Kobe
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